Thursday, February 25, 2016

EXAMPLES

A torpedo under the water, this symbols the speed of the fish.
A bullet, again the speed of the fish
Missile_
Grieving arrow
Sea javelin
Oiled harpoon
Torpedo
Dark bullet

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Motion of the fish🐟

The fish is a torpedo under the water.
That means that the fish was fast slicing  through the water, as fast as a torpedo from the depths of the sea. A swimming projectile, Showing that the fish is like gliding through the water with his one injury. It's coming from the deep, something happened down there? A missile that swam missiles are strong and fast like the tuna.

Friday, January 22, 2016

My Poems


Imagery. Touch, taste, hearing, smell sight


Onomatopoeia=italic+underlined 

Bold=Simile
Underline=Metaphor
Italic=Symbol
Bold+Underline=Imagery 





 21, 2016


A drop of rain is like a sudden knock on the door. Unexpected yet often welcomed with a smile. It can brighten your day or ruin your plans. It can make you laugh or make you sad. Whether the raindrop is moving fast or slow, or is big or small, it always gets everyone’s attention a rain drop contains many secrets, it is a bubble of anticipation and surprise. It cleanses the earth, it feeds the flowers and fills the holes. The rain drop is never silent, it bangs on the roof,it splatters on the windows or splashes into a puddle. This is what a rain drop does.                

Thursday, January 21, 2016

A drop of rain is like a sudden knock on the door. Unexpected yet often welcomed with a smile. It can brighten your day or ruin your plans. It can make you laugh or make you sad. Whether the raindrop is moving fast or slow, or is big or small, it always gets everyone’s attention a rain drop contains many secrets, it is a bubble of anticipation and surprise. It cleanses the earth, it feeds the flowers and fills the holes. The rain drop is never silent, it bangs on the roof,it splatters on the windows or splashes into a puddle. This is what a rain drop does.                



"i chipped away at your cold exterior; dodging shards of ice until you were no longer hard; but even though i cracked the surface; your heart would no melt."

Friday, January 15, 2016

Character
Man Vs technology
Man Vs himself


-cavitation
-Archetype 2-3 characteristics

Landlady
-Billy


Landlady
Sweet
Secretive
Manipulative

The landlady is to bill like a fox is to mice

Thursday, December 10, 2015

Imagery: sight

With a terrible scream
Imagery is using detailed description to help the reader understand what's happening.
in the sound of thunder the author uses a lot of great sight and sound imagery, like when the Tyrannosaurus comes out of the jungle," The Monster, at the first motion, lunged forward with a terrible scream."  He makes it feel like you are seeing what the hunters are seeing, and hearing what they are hearing. This imagery makes you feel like you are there.